Thanks for the comments guys,
Yeah i was particularly interested in prenatal care for pregnant teens because i can relate to it in the sense that i'm a teenage girl. i also think that its important that the girl continues getting support after she tells her loved ones that shes pregnant. i would have certainly enjoyed speaking with young women who had either experienced a teen pregnancy or were currently pregnant, but i was not fully educated about the background info. if i were to do a second stage of my research i would be interested in making a brochure/flyer/website and would also have discussions with teen moms.
oh and yes Arden, that could certainly be useful when i outlined it and wrote it i was more focused on if each paragraph had a central idea and if they flowed more then having concrete arguments.
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